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Comission from Charlietinks by ScorpionPixels Comission from Charlietinks by ScorpionPixels
So, this's a comission, and again, sorry for being so late .... Anyway, this turned out okay, I suppose . The pose is not most original but it works, yeah ?

Hopefully it's good enough C:


Oh yeah, requesting critiques so we'd know where to improve and what's good and stuff .

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Inner Kasumi by ~charlietinks
Design by ~charlietinks
Art, everything else by *UriPixelBananas
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Critique by BombPrincess Nov 29, 2012, 6:59:28 AM
This is really great! :la: It was hard for me to find anywhere to critique, but there are a few things about it that could be tweaked.
The face is beautiful done. I love pixel art, so I just love the whole look of this. Her anatomy is almost perfect, just a few things look a little awkward.
Her right leg (our left) is off. Her calf should be aligned with her thigh, but it seems to go off and twist completely on it's own. I think if it were turned to the right like the other leg (as opposed to being turn towards us, like it is) I think it would look more natural. The other leg is fine.
Her abdomen seems a little long, but I may just be nitpicking :eager:
Lastly, I don't fully understand her pose. What is she sitting on that her bum would be slightly higher off the ground than her feet? It seems like her feet and her bum should be more level.

Other than that, I think this is really great, and I'm sure that whoever commissioned this will be pleased! Keep up the good work!
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charlietinks Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student General Artist
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ITS SO PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE MY INSPIRATION!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT SOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!! :iconcryforeverplz: :iconbrohugplz:
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ScorpionPixels Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much, we're pleased that you like it so much :)
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charlietinks Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student General Artist
YAY!!!!! OH GOD U SERIOUSLY DESERVE ALL THOSE POINTS YOU ARE RECEIVING!!! YOU ARE QUITE THE ARTIST!!!
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ScorpionPixels Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks so much, I'm glad that you like it! :)
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